Monday, April 29, 2013

Looking For Feedback...






It's been a beautiful spring week with the iris's in bloom in front of my apartment. With that brings the bumble bees and hornets. Unfortunately, the hornets decided to make a nest in my air conditioner unit, just outside my door. Agh! But not to worry, when I turned on my air conditioner for the first time this year, they went crazy. I haven't seen them for two days, so I hope they aren't coming back.

What does that have to do with writing, you ask? Believe me, I have a purpose in mind. When I first started writing, all was well and I was very excited about writing every day. But as time went along, it was like the seasons. It was winter, and everything looked bleak. Then spring came, with fresh ideas and challenges to write. Then came the bumble bees and hornets. You know, those critical jabs that you dodge so you won't get stung? I've always said you can learn from criticism; take the best - discard the rest. But when they build a nest near you, it's personal. So I've been careful about polishing my latest story until it shines.

I'm starting a new story this spring, after spending all fall and winter wrapping up Call of the Dragon. While I outline my story, I'm trying to decide whether or not to query an agent. It's a big decision for me, not because I'm worried of rejection, but because I'm not sure if I want to get wrapped up in the process of querying. It seems time consuming, but since I've never done it, I can't say.

If you've done the agent publication route and have some ideas for me, I'd appreciate some feedback. A little goes a long way for me. And since it's spring, I can sit and watch the flowers while I wait to hear from you. Thanks!


Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Medieval Muse in Review






Who said a small book counted fly? I've received three five star reviews and over 900 downloads at Smashwords and their affiliates since publishing this ebook. It was my first endeavor and I chose to make it free of charge. I'm happy to say that it now is continuing to be downloaded, as of today.

I don't think I would have published this ebook, except my sister, artist Loretta Stephenson (she did the cover, also) encouraged me to follow my dreams. She said: "You don't get anything if you don't try at all." It might not sound like the most profound thought in the world, but it is very true. Without giving yourself the permission to get out there and see what happens, you'll always wonder.

Thanks to all of you who have supported me and I hope you enjoyed reading Medieval Muse. I am preparing to bring a new book to you about kings and dragons, entitled Call of the Dragon. It will be out in a few months, but for now, thank you!



Medieval Muse

What happens when Victoria Budroix receives a cameo that promises to give her the desires of her heart? Since she doesn’t know what that would be, a trip to medieval times, intrigue, threat of war and an overbearing lord are on the list for her to choose from. Or could it be meeting her one true love?

Sir William of Conrad has escorted a stranger home to be under his protection. He discovers this woman speaks her own mind and melts his heart. He faces his father’s outrage and a broken alliance with the neighboring clan by falling in love. 

Available at Smashwords here.

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

It's Time To Lose A Little Weight!






Yep! This is me today, as I trundle out of bed and head for my morning cup of coffee. I'm not really as frazzled as this picture displays, but I am feeling a little out of sorts.

You see... I've been on a diet for the last 6 weeks (my sister would rather hear me say: a lifestyle change), and while I can report I've officially lost 19 pounds, I'm feeling like I need to do some other changes also.

One of those places I need to change is in my writing habits. I need to put them on a diet, too. What's that? I can honestly answer that I don't know all the things to clean up my writing, but to start with, I need to look at brevity. How concise is my work? When I write, I tend to ramble and then have to go back and delete a sizable portion of was, just, but, as, and so on. I think you get the picture. In other words, I need to lose a little literary weight.

I recently read another book by Noah Lukeman, How To Write A Great Query Letter and one of the main points I got out of it was keeping to the point. Make your statement and move on. Don't belabor the issue by filling in the white spaces with unnecessary words. In a query letter it will get you rejected. In your stories and books it will cause them to be overweight, or carry a plethora of extraneous material.

Like I said, it's time to experience a lifestyle change and cut out the extra words. Be good to your work and treat it like it was a part of your body. Go on a diet and cut out the extra adverbs and see how beautiful your work becomes. It will be strong and powerful in its new body, carrying less baggage and more literary punch. And, you'll become that lean, mean writing machine that you've always admired in others.

Good luck on you diet! Let me know how you're doing!

Thursday, April 11, 2013

A Thankful Day...






Ever have something staring you right in the face, but you don't recognize what it is you're looking at? That's what I'm feeling like this week. Every time I sit down to make a post, I feel tongue-tied. I just don't have a clue what to write about. Have you ever been in that position?

Last week I visited the good ole' mammography clinic and had the scare of my life. They thought there was something "unusual" on the x-ray. But, after going back today and having the radiologist give me the all clear, I'm breathing easy again and thankful for small blessings.

It's times like these that make you stop and say thank you for the life I lead and the wonderful people I've come to meet along the way. At age 61 I'm awed by all the things that I've experienced in my life. Not only have I been a musician and soloist, I'm traveled to different countries, I've worked as a registered nurse and I experienced having three wonderful children. If all that isn't enough to bring out a few stories, then I don't know what is!

Have a happy day!

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Looking For An Agent?



I have just finished a compelling book entitled How To Land (And Keep) A Literary Agent written by Noah Lukeman. This book gives you all the reasons why you should seek out an agent, how to find the right match and how to keep the relationship intact. I am probably the last person to introduce this book, since I never really wanted to go the route of having an agent, but I have to say, this book gives me lots to think about.

Mr. Lukeman divides his book into three parts:

Part I: You
This part tells why you need an agent, how you should prepare your manuscript and how to build your platform and credentials.

Part II: Them
This part provides you with 35 resources to research agents, how to approach them, the art of follow-up and how to protect yourself.

Part III: After The Storm
This part explains how to keep your agent (and when to let him go), and a section on what to do if you can't find an agent.

Although this may sound like a short book report, I want to emphasize that this book is encouraging to any author, straightforward in its feel from an agent's point of view and honest. I recommend it as excellent material, along with his other book: How To Write A Great Query Letter: Insider Tips & Techniques For Success.

For those of you who already have an agent, this could give you excellent tips on how to keep a great relationship going between the two of you. And how to know when it's not working for you (if you don't already know).

Enjoy reading these books and if you already have read them, are there other books you can recommend? 

Saturday, March 30, 2013

Excerpt: The Chameleon Effect #17

Chavez works for The Agency and has been assigned to rescue Kira Rostropovich and return her to Vega Minor, where she resides with her parents. After being in prison and being 'bought' by Chavez in an auction, Kira is not happy about being searched by Chavez. But he finds a tracking device on her right before a mercenary, Captain Maddeson, finds them and demands that Kira be turned over to him. Chavez immediately makes a sudden jump across the galaxy, much to Kira's surprise! Kira continues to have nightmares and is haunted by the fact that her life is in danger. She demands to go back to Prison Planet 452, but Chavez has someone to add to his crew complement first.
Kira's dream keeps coming back. Is it a warning? All she knows is that her destiny lies intertwined with the prison planet. Will Chavez understand? It is six hours away from rendezvousing with Dr. Winters, who will attempt to help Kira with her problems. But Captain Maddeson is on an intercept course to capture them and return them to the warden. Will they escape? Dr. Winters has diagnosed Kira with the Chameleon Effect and in an attempt to halt its progress, he will use Chavez's DNA. But Kira has other plans and escapes off Chavez's ship, without a word to anyone. Chavez decides to go after her. Kira remembers that her sister is being held hostage and she must return to the prison planet in order to barter for her freedom. But before she can get there, she is captured by Captain Maddeson, who is demanding payment for her return to the warden. While she was fleeing, Chavez fights off an Orgarian boarding party who shoot Dr. Winters. He urges Chavez to go after Kira before he dies. Captain Maddeson has captured Kira and is planning on turning her over to the warden. Chavez is devastated and goes against Agency urging to wait for reinforcements. Is he becoming a renegade?




Kira hugged her sister tight and led her from the cell that had been her home for so many years. Having an younger sister was something of a novelty for Kira, but Demishia made it easy.
“Kira, have you really done what the warden asked? Am I to be set free?”
“Of course! That was his promise.”
“Don’t rely on the words of a mercenary, sister, he will always take what he wants if there is something left for the taking.”
“But he promised!” Kira began wondering if Demishia might be right and in her computer-like brain she quickly formed a plan of action to prove out the warden. “Demishia, go hide on the shuttlecraft until I come for you.”
“Where do I go?”
“Go inside the door and don’t touch anything.”
Since all the guards on the planet knew Demishia, they let her go wherever she chose. Therefore, they took no notice when she headed for the docked shuttle. Kira, on the other hand, was looked upon with great suspicion and the guards required permission from the warden when she attempted to enter his office.
“Well, my little chameleon, didn’t I tell you I would set your sister free when you returned?” The pudgy warden leaned back in his chair and wiped his face with a handkerchief.
“Yes. And now we would like to leave.” Kira raised her webbed fingers and pointed up.
“I’m sorry, Kira, nothing was said about you leaving. Your sister is welcome to go. She is of no more use to me. Her body is worn out from the chromosomal changes it has undergone. But you are in just the beginning stages. I have big plans for you.” The warden picked up a knife and sliced into an apple and popped a piece into his mouth while he spoke to Kira.
Kira’s eyes were like ice as she stood silently before him. “I’m asking you once more to let us go.”
The warden laughed. “Do I need to have you jailed again? Or perhaps strapped down on the table until you agree?”
Then Kira remembered. The warden had strapped her down on the table to force her to obey. He had injected her with mind-altering drugs and wiped her memory. But the chameleon effect had returned her memory to her. Plus, she had discovered that her mind was starting to act like a computer and she could access information with a touch. She stepped over to the computer that was on the warden’s desk. Touching the screen, she read what was in his computer as it quickly flashed by. All of his codes and file names and all of his secrets.
“So… you have a partner on Vega Minor that is waiting for payment. Your code to your credits is pidgeonxxx. How very clever. He was the one who set up the kidnappings. I’ll have to remember that.”
Kira watched the warden visibly pale as she spoke his secrets. “Where did you get that information?” His voice was shaky and he began to sweat profusely.
“You gave it to me when you put this thing in my body. I can tell you more… how about how you’re going to die?”
“Enough!” The warden clambered up out of his chair, puffing and wheezing as he rose. “Guards! Get in here!”
The two guards that had been standing outside his door ran inside, their weapons raised. Looking at Kira, then at the warden, they waited for their instructions.
“Take her to a cell and lock her inside!”
But the guards didn’t move. “What’s the matter? Didn’t you hear me? Get moving!”
“I’m sorry, sir, but she has the whole compound wired to explode. If we arrest her, she’ll blow this place up.” One of the guards put away his blaster and held his hands up in a sign of surrender.
The warden sputtered. “Oh come on! Use your head. She’s not going to blow this place up when she and her sister are in the compound.”
“Her sister isn’t in the compound, sir.”
The warden’s face turned white. But Kira turned and started to walk away. “You stop right now! I’m in charge here!” he sputtered.
But Kira ignored him and kept walking as quickly as she could. It wouldn’t take long before he’d convince his guards that one woman couldn’t wire the whole place. Or could she? Especially since she had special powers.
Arriving at the shuttle, she opened the door and locked it after her. She saw Demishia standing in the middle of the aisle of the shuttle.
“I didn’t touch anything," she said.
“Thank you. Let’s get out of here. Sit down and buckle up.” Kira watched her younger sister move with slow, deliberate motions. She realized had been experimented on before Kira until she was wasting away. She was the product of the failed chameleon effects and her body was dying. Kira seethed inside. Something had to be done and there was only one person she knew who could do it. She sat down and searched out the system for his ship. She found it closer than she expected. It was orbiting prison planet 452.

To be continued...

Sunday, March 24, 2013

Remember Clue?


Do you remember the Parker Brother's game entitled CLUE? It's where you find out who did it, using which weapon, and where it happened. My daughter and I happened to fall into a similar hunt while trying to solve the problems that appeared in my new medical mystery. The story opens with a new employee of a hospital (the protagonist) noticing that an unusual amount of patients were dying in unexpected circumstances, and without any real reasons. She finds herself wrapped up trying to solve this conundrum with the help of one of the staff doctors. What she doesn't know is that perhaps it isn't a single person involved in this nefarious crime.

Why is this story like the game Clue? I found myself listing separate people, associated with certain items and in certain places. For instance, The charge nurse would always have a clipboard, which she kept all her notes on. But that's not all she kept written down on it. She was gathering facts about all the nurses. Was it an attempt to get one fired? Or did she know something else? Also, our protagonist discovers empty vials of atropine in each of the dead patient's rooms. Given enough atropine, it could stop the heart. Did it?

What does it all mean? When I add all my clues together, I'm hoping to have a surprise ending for my readers. But like Clue, it takes a patient building up and elimination of all the clues until one is left. In the drawing room, with the rope. Or is it in the hallway, with the lead pipe? Either way, I'll be sure to let you know!

Do you have a mystery you are trying to solve? How about what your latest wip? That can be a mystery in and of itself. Have you put in enough clues to make it exciting? Let me know what you are working on.